What we had to is make a certificate for her dad about participating on soccer.
Here is my work!
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Hi Kate,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have Included a background in your certificate it looked really nice for the theme. Maybe next time you could make your blurb longer and put in how you felt.
How did the dad do when he started good or bad?
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ReplyDeleteHey Kate, its Eduarda from hornby high i like how you made it very clear that it was a certificate about soccer I think you could have added more information in your blurb but over all its pretty good.
ReplyDelete-Eduarda